I need to modify the attached assignments as per the below notes from instructor. I’m also attaching the original course presentation, the assignment is no 2
This is a poor report although you have all the ingredients to make it good. You started well but faltered later. It is completely descriptive with lots of padding. You lost focus many times and repeated the same idea many times. Many ideas cannot be written without reference, you need to support your argument. Check my in-text remarks. I need to see some analysis about management, motivation schools and org. design. there should be some academic models mentioned in your report. For instance, you haven’t told me which industry could follow this model? what academic model is that? which management theory is deployed? ..etc. Again, you have the power and I sensed it. You need a little notch. By the way, where is your table of contents, exe summary and Intro?
For your resit, follow those guidelines:
1. Question is clear: talk about the deployed organization design and identify its main features related to structure and management, for instance, Authority, responsibilities, symbols, hierarchy, decision making & leadership. Remember the different types of structures of Minzberg academic model & the humanistic school model of management as opposed to other organizational designs.
2. This is clearly a request to highlight the advantage and the disadvantage of the followed approach as well as a comparison between schools-Support your arguments with models and from journal articles.
3. Where this followed organizational design could be deployed. which industry? Why and why not. Good luck